(this is my first forum game, I decided to make one, please no judging)
The war against the Red Clan has never come to an end. You tried to attack one of the soldiers, you dodged their bullets, one shot you, three shot everywhere on your body. You were down. You went into a hiding place between two buildings. Your inventory only had a gun, two bullets and a rope. It was hopeless. Or was it?
You tried to save yourself from the madness. So you crawled with the bullets causing more pains in your wounds. You were close to the Red Clan soldier facing away from you. What item to you use to stealth attack?
Name: David Jones Age: 15 Inventory: P40 Pistol Gun (2), Rough Quality Rope Kills: Status: Wounded Wounds: Bullet shots in: chest, back, left leg ---- *Don't worry about not getting many players on your first forum game. It usually takes a while to get good at making them.*
Let me say this again. Let the players do what they want. This is my main problem with it. You aren't letting them think. What I want to say is "Bullet wounds? You don't say! HELP!". What I have to say is "Please, I'm almost dead!" I want to do more than a few sets of choices can describe. I want freedom.
Name: David Jones Age: 15 Inventory: P40 Pistol Gun (2), Rough Quality Rope Kills: Status: Wounded Wounds: Bullet shots in: chest, back, left leg
*I actually meant I'm sorry for not fighting. That was misinterpereted*
"Don't worry, I can wait so I feel better."
I agree with everything previously stated by other people. You should probaly wait until you have about thirty posts worth of RPGing experience on this website too before you make anything. And over-complexity screws a RPG as well, so it's a fine line between not having enough details and having too much. Just look at succesful RPG's.
