Well, those, are AWESOME!!! Well, i guess any drawing is awesome for me, cuz im a writer and have no drawing skill. But from those 2 pics, ur one of the best drawers ive seen on AG yet! GOOD JOB!
You're very good at drawing eyes. I've always lacked the skill to draw eyelashes, and you seem to be very good at it. I like this one on the second page. I notice the lack of nose, but I understand the hatred of drawing noses. Especially the 'anime' styled ones. I'd like to see more, soon!
These are some nice drawings, especially the eyes. The most recent one is my favorite. The only thing I wonder about is why their chins are all so pointy...
The first one on the 3rd page is nice. The head/jaw is smoother than the other, but the head is just a smidgen too heavy in the forehead area. I also like the second one of the 3rd page. The way the body is twisted is a bit off, but I like how you styled the hair. The nose looks very good, by the way. Her smile is just angled a little too far to the left, though. But I think it still looks very nice. I'm diggin how you draw eyebrows, man.