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This is one of my first forums I don't exactly know what I'm doing xD But this is just a little place to put down your thoughts and ideas, and have others possibly give advice, ideas, or improve your poetry (:

So I am going to put one of mine first xD it's an experimental poem, so that's why the form is all weird xD

My mind,
Ideas come flooding in,
They are
s
c

a
tt
e
r
e
d
or on better days
they are
NeatAndTidy


When my mind goes
blank
The ocean hardly reaches the
b a n k

warmer than the sun
as it sits
boiling,
simmering,
for
i
d
e
a
s

Other days

the ocean roars
Higher

then any wall I have
as a block.

Crashing down,
drowning me in
icy cold water,



ideas
this way


and


t
h
a
t

w
a
y

hard to type
f a s t
enough to keep up the pa c e


The ocean is so
crystal clear
I could see
every
idea imaginable
at the bottom.

with such depth
itâs so hard
to keep
treading

to keep
on
going

I fail
to reach the
bottom.
I swim back up,
remembering what
itâs like to
feel again,
as the water heats

up
and turns
m u r k y
once
again