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Crickster

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Posted August 17, '14 10:52pm UTC

if you read this can you help me think on how to improve it for chapter 2?

[url=http://www.wattpad.com/story/20834040-the-cyborg-and-the-bassist][/url]\r\n\r\nif you read this can you help me think on how to improve it for chapter 2?

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Posted August 21, '14 12:50pm UTC

Use capital letters at starting and names,give it a more classy look for chapter 2.Correct spelling will be great.

Use capital letters at starting and names,give it a more classy look for chapter 2.Correct spelling will be great.

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