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here's a second example

Your self-portrait reminds me of Deadpool. Can't wait to see a finished piece.

cool, I like the idea.

Sounds cool, would like to see more.

Thank you guys, I'll start working on it already.

guys comments on second design for main character!

Maybe make the text a little bit bigger or bolder would be my suggestion. Even though they are only sketches, if you're going to label them, make sure everyone can read the labels clearly.

There's also a distinct possibility that I have poor vision and I don't know it, so alternatively, you could provide captions underneath the images so we can all read every word in every sketch without you having to edit your sketches for the time being.

The drawings look great so far!

Lose the cape, it doesn't fit. Also, like Arm_Candy said, if you could make the words a little bigger and bolder and maybe make the drawings a little darker. On the second I could hardly see there was anything in the picture because it was so light.

Can you make a character based off me? Other wise it is good.

A good idea, and making it about well known users would make it amusing. I think you should turn the lightning legs to swirls, like a djin. Other than that, I like it

I'll work on it when I can, though I'm busy with other projects I'm trying to work on!

What will you do if someone changes their armartar?

I guess I'll have to create them on how they are known if that happens! Though I'm only going to make people are significant to Armor Games, or people who are my friends here!