This is going to be my thread of poems that I wrote. Please leave a comment about what you think of them! If it's a funky poem that needs to be improved, I would like to improve it. But other than that, it's mostly for fun lol
I only wrote one poem so far and to be honest, it might be the only one. But we will see! This one goes out to my girlfriend who I asked out last week. We are still in the honeymoon stage of course, so this is super fresh! Lemme know if I should share it with her on our first month anniversary. I changed her name for privacy.
Her presence is desired
And she makes me so feliz
Perfect when she smiles
Pearly white and clean
You, Elena Ortiz, I wanna kiss you on the cheek!
For me to call you mine
Is a flex to say the least
Ready by my side
Say prayers on our knees
This the typa love that gives angels jubilee
Meet me at the beach
Or on a ‘coaster ride
Never at the movies
To ever see you cry
Here’s to many months together, always you and I