It's been six days alone in this endless desert. I'm ready to quit but I won't. I'm to far in to this now. My camel is starting to die. I don't know of what. But he hasn't been well since our last stop. He a few other and child. Maybe disease. Then in front of my eyes I see the best thing I've seen in six whole days, A pond. I leap off my camel and then I see some thing five times better. My darling wife. Then she dissapears. It was just a mirage. She was murdered by the same people I am hunting down. Their leader goes by the alias "Daisy". One day that Daisy will be burned. The sun is getting to me though. I need to not think of revenge and rescue their current hostage...My son. The camel is dead. Food and water is running low. It looks grim from here. But I must push on. I grab my canteen, my last 3 rations, my knife, and my pistol, and carry on. Further and Further into this sandy hell. I'll be in bashkaba soon. Which is where the rest of this mission shall take place. ---------------------------------------------------------- COMMENTARY: Alright. This is a work in progress. This is basically the middle of my story "In the desert" And prelude and a sequel will be coming when I get around to it. I chose the name "Daisy" as the Alias because I wanted something inncent sounding. The reason the chracter dosen't have a name yet is because I wanted him to be mystrious and I couldn't think of a good name for a viglante. And please don't post opionons on names. I'll think of one soon. But, Do post if you like the story. The draft was written at 11:20 Am before I joined the armorgames community.
Yeah, As I said I am working on a intro. I get in a hurry when I start typing. What it was meant to say was *He bit a few other camels and a child. I have good grammer. I just get in hurry when I type. I am really working on my intro but it hasn't came to me yet once it comes to me It's comes on paper. Thank you for the help!
