Since thisnotalt( pretty sure I got the spelling wrong) suggested it, I think I will create a thread just to post my stories. Ok now to find them... *Digs deep into the AMW Section to find his stories*
what about the harsh russian winter? how will the germans get past that? It (russian winter) got Napolian, it got Hitler...probaly the biggest challenge for operation barbarossa to succede. And stalingrad, kursk...
so russia get concured...then Operation Sealion takes place? The Bismark isnt sunk? The swordfish torpedo planes were shot down? Hitler takes over iceland, greenland then canada? THe nazi world faces japan, the last great super power in the world? hitler is overthrown by a evil underling? OMG!
All that would happen. Plus Hitler would throw down the Japanese and form an alliance with China which remains under nationalist control.
Couldn't resist the urge. I'm Chinese and I share the same surname as Chiang Kai Shek.
The 'Like Suicide' poem is good, but not your est work. IT's more than a bit rough on the edges :/ I like it, though.
For your poetry overall, you may want to try varying your tone some. Your tone is pretty much the same in most of your poems, which tires them some. Other than that, you're a very apt poet.
kool, but the Russian winter? you never answered...
Maybe I shouldn't let it out....but a rapid invasion of East Russia by the KMT Forces of China would tear Russia into half, while America enters the pacific war early to squash the Japanese.
Perhaps I should transform GA I and GA II into part of a bigger WWII series where history is reborn.
Sorry, I write according to mood. You can guess how I'm feeling these days from them =/
BLEH
I feel the same, believe me.
Tone and mood are two different things - and it's important to have both. Your tone is good, but rather similar across different subject matters in some poems :/
It's been varying more lately. . .but tone is probably the 2nd most important aspect to writing. Your tone is evolving a lot though. . . .
