>_> go ahead and critize but i made this in like... twenty minutes
Story: It is the end of the 17th century, mankind has found a way to produce sentient life. The normal Humans life span is near Immortal, though all is not peaceful, war rages on, the originally peaceful country of the U.K. is battle war on two fronts, Germany and Japan. There is no offical reason behind the war, all anyone know's, is that it is horrible. On the fifth day of the new century, a mysterious light appeared in the sky, and destroyed Germany, Japan, and the UK.
Your Story: 01/01/1880, a teen boy wakes up from a three year coma and say's, "Their coming.". 01/02/1880, the same teen boy leaves the hospital and is checked into a mental institution. 01/03/1880, the same boy escapes the mental institution with two other teen's. 01/04/1880, the boy disappears from all known exsistance. 01/05/1880, the boy appears on top of the effriel tower and shouts to the sky, "REPETENCE IS HERE!", the boy was then disappeared into a bright light.
Your Story (2): 01/06/1880, A teenager awoke in a mysterious desert, has the boy looked around he saw he laid inside a giant crater. The boy climbed out of the crater, and looked inside, and saw letters burned into the ground, the words clearly read 'Wraith, Awaken from your slumber.' has the boy looked at the crater, he lifted his right hand and saw a weird pattern on his hand, a Û. 01/07/1880, the boy wanders for day's, until finally seeing a house, the boy rushed to the house yelling. Has the boy opened the door to the house, a weird being jumped destroyed the door from the inside, the boy, scared, lifted his hands to cover his face, has he did, he heard these words in his head, "Repent..." the boy, after hearing the words, felt extremely warm all of a sudden, the boy looked at his right arm, and noticed that it changed... into a giant blade. The monster looked at the boy, and laughed, the monster suddenly charged the boy, and took a swing at him, suddenly, in a flash of light, the monster burned alive. The boy, astonished at what happened, heard a voice in his head again, "Wraith... you... chosen by 'HIM' must harness this power that has been bestowed to you... use the power for justice, and destroy the corruption."
The boy, wondering about the words, lifted his hand again, and spoke, "I repent." suddenly the blade that was his arm, changed back. The boy then stopped, and looked up to the sky, and when he looked, he saw a giant face, smiling at him. The boy looked at the face, and smiled back.
The face looked at him and then looked west, the boy looked to the west, and started walking that way.
