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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Omegap12
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Shepherd

She gave me so much delight.
Showing up at the peak of the swim.
Just so i could show off.

Her dazzling smile brightened me as the energy re-flooded back into me.
And i got first!

Dont make me do THIS!

Seashark001
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Seashark001
613 posts
Nomad

Dont make me do THIS!
A poem that doesn't rhyme
Stereotype poems do confuse
To set up problems
Is this even a poem?

My Battery Is So Low

StormWalker
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8,231 posts
Jester

My Battery Is So Low




-black screen-

I'd better get points for originality

lord0ftiki
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lord0ftiki
1,146 posts
Nomad

I'd better get points for originality,
originality, or style.
As my personal specialty,
is voodoo dolls that smile.

Not sure if that was the intended first line, but whatever.

Curse that .50

Chryosten
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Herald

Curse that .50
It was rather thrifty
I lost my credibility
And now I'm lost at 50

A bird flew by

computo2000
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computo2000
173 posts
Shepherd

A bird flew by
in a wave of defy
and when I asked i why
it said it liked pie

I hope I didnt let you down :P

This thread disgusts me

riku_ullman
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Farmer

check this out! it is pretty funny, so you should get there runny(on the internet).
okay, bad rhyme. sorry. but the one in the link is a good rhyme!

riku_ullman
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Farmer

the this is updated, click on it again.

pangtongshu
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Jester

This thread disgusts me
Putrid poems flaunt about
Beckoning loudly, but nay a shout
And yet, this poem isn't helping

Nicki Minaj has great hair

MoonFairy
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3,386 posts
Shepherd

Thank you pang.

Nicki Minaj has great hair.
Look at it it,
Perfectly styled and primped.
So what if it's a wig?
__

short and not really a poem but aye who cares

I've been waiting for our worlds to be in line

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I've been waiting for our worlds to be in line
It's been a while
since I saw you smile
I'd walk a mile
Just to make sure we're doing fine

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Again, kind of short, but ehh, haven't been here in a while.

Take a moment to pause

XSilentPhantomX
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715 posts
Nomad

Take a moment to pause
You've been on here 2 hours now.
You cannot remember the cause.
It started out with Tumblr and got here somehow.
Maybe you should log off, no?
But the love for Ferrit calls you so...

High as hell sorry for this #YesHe'sBack #PlzNoLock4Necro

When I became a man

Omegap12
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1,980 posts
Shepherd

when i became a man
@TheMostManlyMan came
And stole my manliness
Leaving my in this state
Crying, Crying away.

This is what i become with no Snickers

Guest_Pegasus1234
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Farmer

This is what i become with no snickers.
I rage into endless bickers.
And the longer I brawl,
Throw my head on the wall,
The longer I must wait for more snickers.

I think about the world

Frank_Frooton
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Bard

I think about the world
with all these pigs in front of pearls,
No-one cares the warmth they keep
Until the Storm's cold begins to seep
Through cold soul and empty heart.
I think about the world,
And wonder what sets me apart.

I lost my sunglasses

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