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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR No attachments)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol[nothing full-auto or burst])
Grenades: Will be given
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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pablo4270
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Last Name: Slovick
First Name: Vireman
Rank: Pvt.
Age:25
Gender: M
Birth-date: 1987
Country of Origin: Germany
Biography: Has always loved playing with guns (even after i shot my left thumb off), and has gotten a good carrer making custom weapons.
Height: 6' even
Weight: 250lbs.
Physical Description: White hair(bleached it in my MI6 days), missing left thumb, extremely smart with weapons.
Characteristics:
good:
1. Can snipe very well
2. Good with making custom weapons, and improving others
3. Can shoot better with left hand
bad:
1. Tall
2. white hair sticks out
3. Brain sometimes gets overworked, causes short-term memmory loss, but regains it after brain "cools down"
Primary Wep: Walther WA2000 w/ improved (by myself) scope
Secondary Wep: Heckler & Koch P2000 w/ lazer pointer and silencer
Grenades: M97 Grenades (2)
Knife: KM 2000 New German Infantry Combat Knife
Misc: Radio
Other: none
Squad: Pvt. Heinz Goering

Try not to use parenthesis all the time. I can figure out what you mean when you use german.

You shoot and the explosion kills most of the men. You see one still alive but you run away because you see several Vietnamese run out of the woods.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Problem is: US will use me no matter what, like good traders" I say brushing my TAR "Well when are we landing?"

Runescape124
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Last Name: Slovick
First Name: Vireman
Rank: Pvt.
Age:25
Gender: M
Birth-date: 1987
Country of Origin: Germany
Biography: Has always loved playing with guns (even after i shot my left thumb off), and has gotten a good carrer making custom weapons.
Height: 6' even
Weight: 250lbs.
Physical Description: White hair(bleached it in my MI6 days), missing left thumb, extremely smart with weapons.
Characteristics:
good:
1. Can snipe very well
2. Good with making custom weapons, and improving others
3. Can shoot better with left hand
bad:
1. Tall
2. white hair sticks out
3. Brain sometimes gets overworked, causes short-term memmory loss, but regains it after brain "cools down"
Primary Wep: Walther WA2000 w/ improved (by myself) scope
Secondary Wep: Heckler & Koch P2000 w/ lazer pointer and silencer
Grenades: M97 Grenades (2)
Knife: KM 2000 New German Infantry Combat Knife
Misc: Radio
Other: none
Squad: Pvt. Heinz Goering

ok

We continue along the tree tops, and find the camp.

pablo4270
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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: (4) AP Mines
Other:
Squad: Cpt. Herbert Spurt(Herb), Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef, Pvt. Kurt Hansen(Whitey)

You wake up the next morning and get your thing together. "Compton your gonna be carrying the AP Mines." Yo hop on the slick and touchdown. "We are going to be planting a perimeter of mines around the bank of the North River."

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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"The US is gone and all you care about is if it used you or not? Your country stepped up after the US was gone. Your country drafted you. The US didn't draft you."

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Last Name: Slovick
First Name: Vireman
Rank: Pvt.
Age:25
Gender: M
Birth-date: 1987
Country of Origin: Germany
Biography: Has always loved playing with guns (even after i shot my left thumb off), and has gotten a good carrer making custom weapons.
Height: 6' even
Weight: 250lbs.
Physical Description: White hair(bleached it in my MI6 days), missing left thumb, extremely smart with weapons.
Characteristics:
good:
1. Can snipe very well
2. Good with making custom weapons, and improving others
3. Can shoot better with left hand
bad:
1. Tall
2. white hair sticks out
3. Brain sometimes gets overworked, causes short-term memmory loss, but regains it after brain "cools down"
Primary Wep: Walther WA2000 w/ improved (by myself) scope
Secondary Wep: Heckler & Koch P2000 w/ lazer pointer and silencer
Grenades: M97 Grenades (2)
Knife: KM 2000 New German Infantry Combat Knife
Misc: Radio
Other: none
Squad: Pvt. Heinz Goering

You continue along the tree tops until you see a small camp of two tents.

Runescape124
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Last Name: Slovick
First Name: Vireman
Rank: Pvt.
Age:25
Gender: M
Birth-date: 1987
Country of Origin: Germany
Biography: Has always loved playing with guns (even after i shot my left thumb off), and has gotten a good carrer making custom weapons.
Height: 6' even
Weight: 250lbs.
Physical Description: White hair(bleached it in my MI6 days), missing left thumb, extremely smart with weapons.
Characteristics:
good:
1. Can snipe very well
2. Good with making custom weapons, and improving others
3. Can shoot better with left hand
bad:
1. Tall
2. white hair sticks out
3. Brain sometimes gets overworked, causes short-term memmory loss, but regains it after brain "cools down"
Primary Wep: Walther WA2000 w/ improved (by myself) scope
Secondary Wep: Heckler & Koch P2000 w/ lazer pointer and silencer
Grenades: M97 Grenades (2)
Knife: KM 2000 New German Infantry Combat Knife
Misc: Radio
Other: none
Squad: Pvt. Heinz Goering

We go down to the tents to see whose using them.

Hypermnestra
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Nomad

Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: (4) AP Mines
Other:
Squad: Cpt. Herbert Spurt(Herb), Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef, Pvt. Kurt Hansen(Whitey)

"Sure thing, boss."
I'll grab the AP mines, stick as many of them in my pack as I can, and carry the rest in my arms.
"So, who wants to cover me?"

pablo4270
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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: (4) AP Mines
Other:
Squad: Cpt. Herbert Spurt(Herb), Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef, Pvt. Kurt Hansen(Whitey)

"Well when we get there you will go to the bank of the river closest to us and plant. Fink will go with you can cover you. We will keep an eye out towards the opposite tree line. Yusef is one of the best snipers we got.

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Last Name: Slovick
First Name: Vireman
Rank: Pvt.
Age:25
Gender: M
Birth-date: 1987
Country of Origin: Germany
Biography: Has always loved playing with guns (even after i shot my left thumb off), and has gotten a good carrer making custom weapons.
Height: 6' even
Weight: 250lbs.
Physical Description: White hair(bleached it in my MI6 days), missing left thumb, extremely smart with weapons.
Characteristics:
good:
1. Can snipe very well
2. Good with making custom weapons, and improving others
3. Can shoot better with left hand
bad:
1. Tall
2. white hair sticks out
3. Brain sometimes gets overworked, causes short-term memmory loss, but regains it after brain "cools down"
Primary Wep: Walther WA2000 w/ improved (by myself) scope
Secondary Wep: Heckler & Koch P2000 w/ lazer pointer and silencer
Grenades: M97 Grenades (2)
Knife: KM 2000 New German Infantry Combat Knife
Misc: Radio
Other: none
Squad: Pvt. Heinz Goering

You walk into one tent to see that it is full of Vietnamese solders.

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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: (4) AP Mines
Other:
Squad: Cpt. Herbert Spurt(Herb), Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef, Pvt. Kurt Hansen(Whitey)

Okay.
I'll start off towards the river, making sure not to go too far ahead of Fink.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"My country traded me to the US for a couple of screws for a tank," I say fiddling with my rifle. "I care about saving the USA as much as I care about saving some ***-hole I never heard of, what I am doing is just my job, hoping it brings more trade and protection to Israel"

Runescape124
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Nomad

Last Name: Slovick
First Name: Vireman
Rank: Pvt.
Age:25
Gender: M
Birth-date: 1987
Country of Origin: Germany
Biography: Has always loved playing with guns (even after i shot my left thumb off), and has gotten a good carrer making custom weapons.
Height: 6' even
Weight: 250lbs.
Physical Description: White hair(bleached it in my MI6 days), missing left thumb, extremely smart with weapons.
Characteristics:
good:
1. Can snipe very well
2. Good with making custom weapons, and improving others
3. Can shoot better with left hand
bad:
1. Tall
2. white hair sticks out
3. Brain sometimes gets overworked, causes short-term memmory loss, but regains it after brain "cools down"
Primary Wep: Walther WA2000 w/ improved (by myself) scope
Secondary Wep: Heckler & Koch P2000 w/ lazer pointer and silencer
Grenades: M97 Grenades (2)
Knife: KM 2000 New German Infantry Combat Knife
Misc: Radio
Other: none
Squad: Pvt. Heinz Goering

Awake or asleep?

pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Slovick
First Name: Vireman
Rank: Pvt.
Age:25
Gender: M
Birth-date: 1987
Country of Origin: Germany
Biography: Has always loved playing with guns (even after i shot my left thumb off), and has gotten a good carrer making custom weapons.
Height: 6' even
Weight: 250lbs.
Physical Description: White hair(bleached it in my MI6 days), missing left thumb, extremely smart with weapons.
Characteristics:
good:
1. Can snipe very well
2. Good with making custom weapons, and improving others
3. Can shoot better with left hand
bad:
1. Tall
2. white hair sticks out
3. Brain sometimes gets overworked, causes short-term memmory loss, but regains it after brain "cools down"
Primary Wep: Walther WA2000 w/ improved (by myself) scope
Secondary Wep: Heckler & Koch P2000 w/ lazer pointer and silencer
Grenades: M97 Grenades (2)
Knife: KM 2000 New German Infantry Combat Knife
Misc: Radio
Other: none
Squad: Pvt. Heinz Goering

Awake wondering what you are doing.

Runescape124
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Runescape124
3,028 posts
Nomad

Last Name: Slovick
First Name: Vireman
Rank: Pvt.
Age:25
Gender: M
Birth-date: 1987
Country of Origin: Germany
Biography: Has always loved playing with guns (even after i shot my left thumb off), and has gotten a good carrer making custom weapons.
Height: 6' even
Weight: 250lbs.
Physical Description: White hair(bleached it in my MI6 days), missing left thumb, extremely smart with weapons.
Characteristics:
good:
1. Can snipe very well
2. Good with making custom weapons, and improving others
3. Can shoot better with left hand
bad:
1. Tall
2. white hair sticks out
3. Brain sometimes gets overworked, causes short-term memmory loss, but regains it after brain "cools down"
Primary Wep: Walther WA2000 w/ improved (by myself) scope
Secondary Wep: Heckler & Koch P2000 w/ lazer pointer and silencer
Grenades: M97 Grenades (2)
Knife: KM 2000 New German Infantry Combat Knife
Misc: Radio
Other: none
Squad: Pvt. Heinz Goering

I say"uh, hi?" and shoot every last one with my pistol, and go check out the other tent.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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You missed me....

Runescape124
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You missed me....


what? aint u some plae else?
Runescape124
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i thought you cant be a viet...

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