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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR No attachments)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol[nothing full-auto or burst])
Grenades: Will be given
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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Hypermnestra
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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname: Doc
Codename: Hotel 5
Rank: Corporal.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: Medikit (2 Morphine Needles, 100% Gauges, 50 Painkiller, Defibrillator, 75 Bandages, 3 Splints, 3 Slings, 100% Antibiotic)
Secondary Wep: OTs-02 Kiparis w/ Folding Stock
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Sgt. George Hansen(Preacher), Pvt. Yusef, Pvt. Greg Welts(Cuddles), Pfc. Margret Sell.

I'll go into the hole so I'm not getting rained on as much.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck)
Other: None

"Canuck, know of any nice living in these woods?"

pablo4270
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck)
Other: None

"What?"

Wat?

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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname: Doc
Codename: Hotel 5
Rank: Corporal.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: Medikit (2 Morphine Needles, 100% Gauges, 50 Painkiller, Defibrillator, 75 Bandages, 3 Splints, 3 Slings, 100% Antibiotic)
Secondary Wep: OTs-02 Kiparis w/ Folding Stock
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Sgt. George Hansen(Preacher), Pvt. Yusef, Pvt. Greg Welts(Cuddles), Pfc. Margret Sell.

You start dozing off when you are woken up by mortar shots hitting the ground and mud splashing your face.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck)
Other: None

"Apparently we're gonna have to either get back into that tunnel, or camp this and... Hunt...," I say sitting. "I'd do 'go back to that tunnel', but it seems Echo is a little afraid of going back in"

pablo4270
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Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck)
Other: None

"I'll do it for sarge. Lets go grab the radio. They probably cleared most of the tunnel out when the explosions went off."

Hypermnestra
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Nomad

Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname: Doc
Codename: Hotel 5
Rank: Corporal.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: Medikit (2 Morphine Needles, 100% Gauges, 50 Painkiller, Defibrillator, 75 Bandages, 3 Splints, 3 Slings, 100% Antibiotic)
Secondary Wep: OTs-02 Kiparis w/ Folding Stock
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Sgt. George Hansen(Preacher), Pvt. Yusef, Pvt. Greg Welts(Cuddles), Pfc. Margret Sell.

Grab my gun and poke my head out of the hole to see what's happening.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck)

We go to the tunnel. "Echo take the lead, search for where you might remember you lost it. Canuck, you go in the middle, cover fire Echo if he needs it. I'll go from the back to make sure... Yeah, I think you get me," I say when we go into the tunnel.

pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname: Doc
Codename: Hotel 5
Rank: Corporal.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: Medikit (2 Morphine Needles, 100% Gauges, 50 Painkiller, Defibrillator, 75 Bandages, 3 Splints, 3 Slings, 100% Antibiotic)
Secondary Wep: OTs-02 Kiparis w/ Folding Stock
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Sgt. George Hansen(Preacher), Pvt. Yusef, Pvt. Greg Welts(Cuddles), Pfc. Margret Sell.

It is still dark out but you can see smoke and people poking their heads out of their holes too.

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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck)

You aren't walking for too long when you hear, "Found it!" You start running back when you hear echo say, "Guys help!" You spin around and see him fighting a Korean who stabbed him in the arm with a knife.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck)

Use my perk, again. Aim the AR at the korean's head and shoot 5 bullets in. Then grab hold of Echo and boost him through.

pablo4270
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Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck)

"Thanks lets get out of here." You exit the rat tunnel and call in a chopper. On the ride out you are riding when suddenly a bullet flies through Canucks head.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo)
other: none

I grunt. "This has been a wonderful day," I mutter. I check for any kind of pulse. Call the pilot and take out my AR. I ready the Grenade launcher and peek out the slick to see what shot Canuck.


BTW, Where's McKenzie?

pablo4270
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Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo)
other: none

McKenzie is buried in dirt somewhere.

You see the sun reflecting off several scopes in three trees up ahead

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo)
other: none

Jump back in cover and report, "Three snipers! Hold tight!". I shoot a grenade down between two trees that have snipers on them and make them fall down, thus killing the snipers.

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pablo4270
1,930 posts
Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo)
other: none

You see them fall but you think one got up. Before you can do anything the Pilot is hit and the Co Pilot is blinded from the windshield exploding.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo)
other: none

Get over into the pilot's seat. Try slapping the co-pilot and find some kind of auto pilot button. If I don't find one I fiddle with the pilot's stick and fiddle around with it until I find a way to stabilize the slick.

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