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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Roccess
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...I'm sorry if I'm doing this unartistically or wrong but I wanted to join this to learn how to make a better haiku from practice/seeing other people's.

jezz
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Hello, Ni Hao,
Bonjour, Geia So, Aloha,
Guten Tag, Salve, Hola!


I'm convinced the first line is only 4 syllables, the second line is 8 syllables and the last line is 7 syllables
I'm most likely wrong but.. Yeah.
Skeleton_Pilot
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murasaki9
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@Acmed well DT07 started the dictatorship mura just supported it and became the dictator >.>/

I second that. :|
Welcome back to everyone who is returning and welcome to all who are new!!
I've been a-way, tending to World Affairs in the Realm of Literature. I have broken a-way to check on my minions. Jk...

Hope and Change

That gun is deadly
Put it away for a change
so I can have hope

Response to Loony
My gun will kill you
If you don't hide right away
There'll be no hope, change
murasaki9
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WAIT ---- WHAT???
Skeleton_Pilot
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WAIT ---- WHAT???


Crazy, isn't it?
I looked back a few pages
And alas, there 'twas!
Roccess
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a-way

Confusing...

Anyway,
I'm convinced the first line is only 4 syllables, the second line is 8 syllables and the last line is 7 syllables
I'm most likely wrong but.. Yeah.


I couldn't figure it out either, and that is why it is the main reason that I didn't like it. I believe in that post I said that..

So...

To Get To Infinity

One thousand and one
Times seven hundred billion and
Plus fish times nine, yes!
murasaki9
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Confusing...

You are confused. Hmm...
murasaki9
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Is Haiku Land dead?
I think not, as long as we
are alive and well

Skeleton_Pilot
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Haiku land can't die
It can only go to sleep
For a couple days

shock457
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Well this is what I'm feeling like right now.

Burnout
The light-headedness
The fatigue running through me
Rest and rest I shall

*Yawn* School tires me out.
I get like 6-7 hours instead of my usual 9-10 hours of sleep. Occasionally sleep 3-4 hours. BURNOUT!!!

murasaki9
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Right on, Regulars! Haiku Land can't die! It can only go to sleep! I like that!

Wow, Shock, that's terrible. I estimate that I go to sleep by midnight and wake up about 6am because I always get woken. So I only get around 5-6 hours of sleep even if I go back to sleep till 8am. That's just not enough, is it!?
And 3-4 hours, real BURNOUT!!!

REPLY
Your mouth is moving
But I hear nothing, no sound
Why won't you reply?

shock457
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Lol.

Weakness
I lay still, tired
I lay still about my pain
I lay still, sleeping

Pain as in painful to wake up in the morning. XD
Don't take it the wrong way.

Twelvegageshoty
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Ode to the Internet Forum
Internet forum,
What topics are brought about!
My boredom shall end.

Not so great I know I just wanted to join in the fun though lol

Skeleton_Pilot
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I lay still, tired


Contrary to that ^^
"Tired" is just one syllable
As opposed to two
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