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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Where is the remorse?
Has emotion left us all?
Where has kindness gone?

acmed
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Nomad

Up upon the ground.
Never know how high it is,
Until....... You spit down.

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acmed
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Nomad

Haters Gonna Hate.
Can you do me a favor,
Not be one of them.

dair5
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Shepherd

I stand before you.
I an attempt to feel whole,
I'll give you my soul.

Sorry it's pretty suckish.

acmed
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Nomad

It's a dead man's call.
Shall live to become evil?
Or die a hero?

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Wow, people! I'm getting some great contributions here!

What we do not know
can not come near and hurt us
or so they all say

acmed
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Nomad

Wow, people! I'm getting some great contributions here!


Haiku is my favorite form of poetry. Thanks for the thread!

A rose has its thorns.
Each system has a virus.
Hearts, must be broken.
murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Haiku is my favorite form of poetry. Thanks for the thread

I didn't know that! You should post here more often! Thanks Acmed!

Joy is mine to have
love is mine to give away
grief, not to be had
murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Tireless they are
to squeeze the lie out of me
they will not succeed

acmed
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Nomad

You should post here more often!


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Look me in the eye.
Don't turn away, it's too late.
I just fell in love.
acmed
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Nomad

Sorry for DP, but I had an Image Fail.

You should post here more often!


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dair5
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Shepherd

Ok, try two.

I can't hold my mind.
Just let the thoughts flow, please stop!
I'm out of control.

That was the best I could come up with. I need help.

Masterforger
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Peasant

Ahem. I am sorry to say this, but apparently, for a proper haiku, it has to at least hint at a season. i have researched this.

acmed
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Nomad

Ahem. I am sorry to say this, but apparently, for a proper haiku, it has to at least hint at a season. i have researched this.


But not in Haiku land! We're just speaking our minds through poetry!

Black and White sorrow.
Here's the tools of creation.
Now color me in.
acmed
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Nomad

I don't care at all.
Just as long as we have fun,
We dominate Earth!

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