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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR, LMG, SMG or Sniper Rifle, 1 attachment)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol, Shotgun or Machine Pistol, 1 attachment)
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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pablo4270
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zero in one hour cmon guys :P I worked hard on this!!! It was a huge success a year ago with like ovr 300 posts!

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"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.


Explain please? I don't quite this part. =P
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Explain please? I don't quite this part. =P

It is the lady at the desk finishing explaining how things will work. Oh scratch the no attachments thing do as it says in the sheet.
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Last Name:Pavlicic
First Name:Aleksa
Rank: Pvt.
Age:31
Gender:Male
Birth-date:
Country of Origin:Serbia
Biography:Born into a military family he continues the tradition and the age of 17 he became a soldier, but a year later the Kosovo war began he was in many battles and many time he was wounded in the war he saw many terrible things and sometimes he have flashbacks from the war after the war left the army and became an criminal and everything was fine until one day he killed the wrong people police and mafia start chasing him so he fled from country and becomes a mercenary, and then company send him to Asia
Height:1,96 m
Weight:92 Kg
Physical Description:Witty,Patriot,Hate injustice
Characteristics:Can i later finish this?
Primary Wep:H&K G36
Secondary Wep:Benelli M4
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife:A modern combat knife
Misc: none

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Last Name:Pavlicic
First Name:Aleksa
Rank: Pvt.
Age:31
Gender:Male
Birth-date:
Country of Origin:Serbia
Biography:Born into a military family he continues the tradition and the age of 17 he became a soldier, but a year later the Kosovo war began he was in many battles and many time he was wounded in the war he saw many terrible things and sometimes he have flashbacks from the war after the war left the army and became an criminal and everything was fine until one day he killed the wrong people police and mafia start chasing him so he fled from country and becomes a mercenary, and then company send him to Asia
Height:1,96 m
Weight:92 Kg
Physical Description:Witty,Patriot,Hate injustice
Characteristics:Can i later finish this?
Primary Wep:H&K G36
Secondary Wep:Benelli M4
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife:A modern combat knife
Misc: none

Flip the physical description and characteristics. You need a knife, and a date of birth, ill figure out the year if you want

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Last Name: Cells
First Name: Steve
Rank: Pvt.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Birth-date: 1992
Country of Origin: Russia
Biography: His family was a military family from generation to generation, and he promised that he would join the Russian Military and serve the best he can.
Height: 5 feet, 7 inches
Weight: 132 lbs
Physical Description: A slim body for quick but silent movement.
Characteristics:
(Good) Smart, Tactical, Fast
(Bad) Not as Tough as Others, Easily Angered, Easily Hurt
Primary Wep: SV-98 Sniper Rifle with Silencer
Secondary Wep: .357 Magnum with Laser Sights
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife: M9 Stealth Knife
Misc: none

Is this okay?

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Last Name:Pavlicic
First Name:Aleksa
Rank: Pvt.
Age:31
Gender:Male
Birth-date:1981
Country of Origin:Serbia
Biography:Born into a military family he continues the tradition and the age of 17 he became a soldier, but a year later the Kosovo war began he was in many battles and many time he was wounded in the war he saw many terrible things and sometimes he have flashbacks from the war after the war left the army and became an criminal and everything was fine until one day he killed the wrong people police and mafia start chasing him so he fled from country and becomes a mercenary, and then company send him to Asia
Height:1,96 m
Weight:92 Kg
Physical Description:Witty,Patriot,Hate injustice
Characteristics:
Bad-Flashbacks,Bad liar,Impatient
Good-Mechanic,Survivalist,Never give up
Primary Wep:H&K G36
Secondary Wep:Benelli M4
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife:KA-BAR
Misc: none

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Last Name: Cells
First Name: Steve
Rank: Pvt.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Birth-date: 1992
Country of Origin: Russia
Biography: His family was a military family from generation to generation, and he promised that he would join the Russian Military and serve the best he can.
Height: 5 feet, 7 inches
Weight: 132 lbs
Physical Description: A slim body for quick but silent movement.
Characteristics:
(Good) Smart, Tactical, Fast
(Bad) Not as Tough as Others, Easily Angered, Easily Hurt
Primary Wep: SV-98 Sniper Rifle with Silencer
Secondary Wep: .357 Magnum with Laser Sights
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife: M9 Stealth Knife
Misc: none

It looks good but I don't thing you could do a laser sight on the magnum and running around a forest all covertly with a laser pointing every which way isn't so smart.

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Last Name: Cells
First Name: Steve
Rank: Pvt.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Birth-date: 1992
Country of Origin: Russia
Biography: His family was a military family from generation to generation, and he promised that he would join the Russian Military and serve the best he can.
Height: 5 feet, 7 inches
Weight: 132 lbs
Physical Description: A slim body for quick but silent movement.
Characteristics:
(Good) Smart, Tactical, Fast
(Bad) Not as Tough as Others, Easily Angered, Easily Hurt
Primary Wep: SV-98 Sniper Rifle with Silencer
Secondary Wep: .357 Magnum with Laser Sights
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife: M9 Stealth Knife
Misc: none

I can't think of anything else since extended magazine doesn't make sense and plus it's not possible to silence a revolver.

pablo4270
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Last Name: Cells
First Name: Steve
Rank: Pvt.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Birth-date: 1992
Country of Origin: Russia
Biography: His family was a military family from generation to generation, and he promised that he would join the Russian Military and serve the best he can.
Height: 5 feet, 7 inches
Weight: 132 lbs
Physical Description: A slim body for quick but silent movement.
Characteristics:
(Good) Smart, Tactical, Fast
(Bad) Not as Tough as Others, Easily Angered, Easily Hurt
Primary Wep: SV-98 Sniper Rifle with Silencer
Secondary Wep: .357 Magnum with Laser Sights
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife: M9 Stealth Knife
Misc: none

Yeah that is a tough one. I have seen a few pictures with a scope on it.(The Python right?)

pablo4270
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Last Name:Pavlicic
First Name:Aleksa
Rank: Pvt.
Age:31
Gender:Male
Birth-date:1981
Country of Origin:Serbia
Biography:Born into a military family he continues the tradition and the age of 17 he became a soldier, but a year later the Kosovo war began he was in many battles and many time he was wounded in the war he saw many terrible things and sometimes he have flashbacks from the war after the war left the army and became an criminal and everything was fine until one day he killed the wrong people police and mafia start chasing him so he fled from country and becomes a mercenary, and then company send him to Asia
Height:1,96 m
Weight:92 Kg
Physical Description:Witty,Patriot,Hate injustice
Characteristics:
Bad-Flashbacks,Bad liar,Impatient
Good-Mechanic,Survivalist,Never give up
Primary Wep:H&K G36
Secondary Wep:Benelli M4
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife:KA-BAR
Misc: none

Looks good but you can add one attachment to each.

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Last Name: Cells
First Name: Steve
Rank: Pvt.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Birth-date: 1992
Country of Origin: Russia
Biography: His family was a military family from generation to generation, and he promised that he would join the Russian Military and serve the best he can.
Height: 5 feet, 7 inches
Weight: 132 lbs
Physical Description: A slim body for quick but silent movement.
Characteristics:
(Good) Smart, Tactical, Fast
(Bad) Not as Tough as Others, Easily Angered, Easily Hurt
Primary Wep: SV-98 Sniper Rifle with Silencer
Secondary Wep: .357 Magnum with Medium Range Scope
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife: M9 Stealth Knife
Misc: none

Changed to Medium Range Scope. Laser Sights doesn't sound like a good idea lol.

ubica88
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Last Name:Pavlicic
First Name:Aleksa
Rank: Pvt.
Age:31
Gender:Male
Birth-date:1981
Country of Origin:Serbia
Biography:Born into a military family he continues the tradition and the age of 17 he became a soldier, but a year later the Kosovo war began he was in many battles and many time he was wounded in the war he saw many terrible things and sometimes he have flashbacks from the war after the war left the army and became an criminal and everything was fine until one day he killed the wrong people police and mafia start chasing him so he fled from country and becomes a mercenary, and then company send him to Asia
Height:1,96 m
Weight:92 Kg
Physical Description:Witty,Patriot,Hate injustice
Characteristics:
Bad-Flashbacks,Bad liar,Impatient
Good-Mechanic,Survivalist,Never give up
Primary Wep:H&K G36 with Silencer
Secondary Wep:Benelli M4
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife:KA-BAR
Misc: none

Dont know what attachment to add at Benelli M4

pablo4270
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Last Name: Cells
First Name: Steve
Rank: Pvt.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Birth-date: 1992
Country of Origin: Russia
Biography: His family was a military family from generation to generation, and he promised that he would join the Russian Military and serve the best he can.
Height: 5 feet, 7 inches
Weight: 132 lbs
Physical Description: A slim body for quick but silent movement.
Characteristics:
(Good) Smart, Tactical, Fast
(Bad) Not as Tough as Others, Easily Angered, Easily Hurt
Primary Wep: SV-98 Sniper Rifle with Silencer (10/10 50 extra rounds)
Secondary Wep: .357 Magnum with Medium Range Scope (6/6 30 extra rounds)
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife: M9 Stealth Knife
Misc: none

The next day you wake up from the barracks and head to your assigned plane. You don't know were you are going and the whole plane is a mishmosh of all types of solders, the guy next to you, a medic working with the paratroopers, says he heard from another guy that you are going to Cambodia, one of the lesser powerful countries in the power junkie group called KAOS.

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Last Name:Pavlicic
First Name:Aleksa
Rank: Pvt.
Age:31
Gender:Male
Birth-date:1981
Country of Origin:Serbia
Biography:Born into a military family he continues the tradition and the age of 17 he became a soldier, but a year later the Kosovo war began he was in many battles and many time he was wounded in the war he saw many terrible things and sometimes he have flashbacks from the war after the war left the army and became an criminal and everything was fine until one day he killed the wrong people police and mafia start chasing him so he fled from country and becomes a mercenary, and then company send him to Asia
Height:1,96 m
Weight:92 Kg
Physical Description:Witty,Patriot,Hate injustice
Characteristics:
Bad-Flashbacks,Bad liar,Impatient
Good-Mechanic,Survivalist,Never give up
Primary Wep:H&K G36 with Silencer (30/30 150 extra rounds)
Secondary Wep:Benelli M4 (7/7 21 extra rounds)
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife:KA-BAR
Misc: none

You could add an optic sight, grip or a place on the side of the gun to put ammo for a fast reload.

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NOTE: speaking of reload I added ammo capacities to your guns.

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Last Name: Cells
First Name: Steve
Rank: Pvt.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Birth-date: 1992
Country of Origin: Russia
Biography: His family was a military family from generation to generation, and he promised that he would join the Russian Military and serve the best he can.
Height: 5 feet, 7 inches
Weight: 132 lbs
Physical Description: A slim body for quick but silent movement.
Characteristics:
(Good) Smart, Tactical, Fast
(Bad) Not as Tough as Others, Easily Angered, Easily Hurt
Primary Wep: SV-98 Sniper Rifle with Silencer (10/10 50 extra rounds)
Secondary Wep: .357 Magnum with Medium Range Scope (6/6 30 extra rounds)
Grenades: x2 M67 Grenades
Knife: M9 Stealth Knife
Misc: none

Lay back a little bit while waiting for the plane to land. (Or until someone says what to do)

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