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manny6574
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Hi, this is my first website in HTML (don't have much to put on yet). It is a website of umm... me!! I don't know if it is good or not so if could give feedback on bad and good points, improvements so on (ignore the amount of pics and anims/games, that will come soon).

It took me 2 days to do it all: art, HTML, Flash, TIME!!!

Can't believe I made it so good though!!

My Website

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BeastMode10
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Uh...It's apparantly 'under review', because it's being checked for malicous activity, and won't be available for another couple of hours.

samdawghomie
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You see this page, because the system administrator of 000webhost.com is currently checking this website for malicious content. This redirect will be removed once we will finish manually checking all files on this account. As far we check over 100 websites, it can take about 2-4 hours to complete. If you are the owner of this website, you will get email confirmation once it's done. If you are a visitor - please come back later.


Well, It seems we will have to wait a while.
Elitemagical
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Manny, why not just paste the source code (if it ain't too long) so we can look at it offline?

Darkroot
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First of all the html is not valid and secondly isn't this made in dreamweaver?

Also whats up with the css in your html when your linking to a style sheet?

leo99rules
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I suggest pivot for animating...

Anyways, there isn't much to comment on (no animations,games or art)
and I suggest even if the games are bad putting it on there. Also you should get your deviantart on there.

leo99rules
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Woops, I missed your art.

Wyuen
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My Thoughts:

Firstly, Wow I like it. The colour scheme, light blue and white and black text somehow fits.

Your drawings, and the fact that the buttons of the texts are hand drawn creates an artsy atmosphere if you know what I mean.

Overall its pretty good for a 13 year old, I mean I don't even know how you create a website LOL

manny6574
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Yea, by the way thats just in two days it will get better soon!!

manny6574
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First of all the html is not valid and secondly isn't this made in dreamweaver?

Also whats up with the css in your html when your linking to a style sheet?


What do you mean?? It works.
Anyways, there isn't much to comment on (no animations,games or art)
and I suggest even if the games are bad putting it on there. Also you should get your deviantart on there.


yea, doing that today(day three)

nice...but what is it about?


It's a place where I'll put all my good enough work!!

Overall its pretty good for a 13 year old, I mean I don't even know how you create a website LOL


Sorry, I not really 13, I'm 12 and I don't know why I put that there?? usually want people to say that I'm 12 (13 in month)

As for making a website, you probably can learn HTML in a week or two. (I did it in a week and three days). HTML is easier than you think!!
manny6574
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isn't this made in dreamweaver?


How did you know?? But I only used the code I did nothing outside of the code!!!
manny6574
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sorry for quad post (why can I never write a lot in one post???!)!

But, I aligned and the boxes(they were all over the place but now they're even + I added a self portrait hehe

Elitemagical
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It's not amazing, but it's good enough if you're still learning web design.

Darkroot
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How did you know?? But I only used the code I did nothing outside of the code!!!


Because I can tell the difference between a proper html valid webpages and something someone spawned using dreamweaver.


First of all the html is not valid and secondly isn't this made in dreamweaver?

Also whats up with the css in your html when your linking to a style sheet?

What do you mean?? It works.


I never said it didn't work I just said it isn't valid.

You can check here.
or here.

I would give you a link to check your css but i'm guessing you don't have one since some of your css is located in the html.

Otherwise I can't really say anything positive since the best webpages are not made in dreamweaver.
random_player_of_ag
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Website enirely by: manny6574


Fix that error.


The font is just yuck.. I don't like it, try to pick a font with more curves in the letters. Something more appealing. Use more colors in your site, a mixture between bright colors and dark colors

Those "subtitles" (can't find the word) that appear when you put your mouse in that toolbar require a bit more work. Better writing means more appealing.


Also make sure you add something to warn the visitors StickPage.com is not affiliated with your site, or else the visitors might think StickPage created that site and you're collabing with them.


And make sure all art/games/animations/whatever has a little ID to identify it as your own work, just to avoid copyright troubles and art stealing.


Good luck!
bacobit
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When I first got on, the font made my eyes hurt

Thats the only thing really have to comment on

Look at my website its none done yet though

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