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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR No attachments)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol[nothing full-auto or burst])
Grenades: Will be given
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none

This isn't COD no red dot sight in the shape of a T and extended mags can't happen on a Deagle.

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none

ok, thats where i got the idea, and i'm done with it, but can it be green dot sight? i really like green but if not, just dont put it on.

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none

You could but the only problem is that green dot against jungle background isn't so good.

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none


ok, i'll leave it as is.

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)

You get word that there is a squad opening up in Laos and you will be going in an hour. You pack your things and hop on a slick(transport copter) to get you there. You get to the camp which is a giant field of tents. You find the HQ and tell them you are here. An officer directs you towards your platoon tent. When you get there you see the tent full of men. One man shout out for you to see him. "Are you Pvt. Foss? I am Sargent Peter Durant but you can call me Rocco, my middle name. Richie, Tom, Bartholomew get over here and meet your new squad mate! This is Pvt. Trent Foss he will be India 5. Trent, this is Richard Perkins, Thomas Hart, and Bartholomew Fredrickson. Put you stuff at the bunk above Tom's bunk and meet us at the mess tent."

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

"Your welcome follow me and cover our tracks as we pass." You guys walk for a few miles and see a warehouse. McKenzie motions for you to get down and out of sight and he gets to work setting up his M40 sniper rifle. You see the radio light go on and kilt picks it up. "Change of plans. After we are done sniping, we will join up with the other snipers and go to another spot. We will then make out way to the top of that radio tower kill anyone up there and snipe from there."

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)

"uhh, yes sir?" i say, putting my equipment carefully on the top bunk. (Then hurry off to the mess tent?)

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

"Yes, sir" I say following Kilt and waiting for orders while looking around with my binoculars, uzi in other hand.

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

Ok I am all set up radio in to Sarge and see if they are set up.

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)

Since your new at this rite? Here is a tip. Don't question what you put down just put it down.

You go to the mess hall and sit down with the squad. Rocco says, "Ok men today we are going to head out in about an hour to go into the elephant grass and do something rather leisurely. We are goin to start torching that blasted razor glass because we think the enemy has rat tunnels and such in the grass. We gonna get M202 Incendiary rocket launchers."

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)


btw, the umm, yes sir? was me talking in the game, not quite being sure if i should say that or not, i didn't mean as in "ummm (should i say yes sir?)". but yes with the (and heads off to mess tent?) i'm not sure if you were still there or already left for the mess tent, you didn't say anything about leaving.


"what? you call that leisurely?!? i've heard about elephant grass, it cuts you up bad!" I say, wolfing down my food."and also, if we burn it, won't it start a rather large fire, indecating (sorry, not sure how to spell it.) where we are, and if the have rat tunnels, they probably also have mortar teams, shouldn't they?" I say.

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Peasant

Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)

"Well that was taken into heavy consideration but burning grass is much better than going around in a jungle full of Laotian solders. The plan is for us to have 2 M0202s and launch the one rocket from one side and other rocket into the other side so the fire can get to the middle. When the fire dies down I hear they are sending in a ground pounding unit to go in and take out the tunnels."

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)


"well, that makes me feel a lot better than doing my idea of it, by going out there with gasoline and matches, haha i guess i didn't give you enough credit" I say nervously, while eating.

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

"Big papa this is Papa 5, what are you up to?" I say calling to Sarge through the radio

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1,930 posts
Peasant

Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)

Chuckles bursts out with laughter. You can see why he got his name. You will be leaving to go and get in a slick to go to the grass soon.

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

Big papa is Buckley. Sarge come on and says, "Ok tell Patrick to fire when ready."

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Nomad

Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)

"well, that was odd of chuckles" i say to myself, while walking off to get a slick. "I just hope that none of this mission goes bad, or people may think it's my fault."

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Nomad

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

"Whenever your ready, Kilt" I say to Patrick through the radio

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