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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR No attachments)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol[nothing full-auto or burst])
Grenades: Will be given
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)

Perkins and Rocco are already there. "Lucky You! Since you are the second person to get here you get the second M202. Looks like it will be Perkins, Tom and you and Chuckles is with me." Sarge says. Everyone arrives and gets on the slick. Your plane is flying in the jungle when you hear the deafening shots of AA rounds. The red emergency light goes on and the blades of the copter stop. You crash into the ground as the pilot is shouting, "WE'RE GOING DOOOWWNN." (but your not dead yet)

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

"Alright lets go with this far chump first," he says picking a guard off. Soon all the guards are dead and you radio to sarge and say you guys can commence the attack. Soon you see several people planting charges on various spots in the walls. The C4 explodes and they all rush in. So do all the Laotian Solders.

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco), Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom), Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles)

"holy ****!" I say, getting off the ground while putting the m202 on my strap on the back of my backpack. Then, grabbing my AUG, I start searching around the crash site for survivors.

pablo4270
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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco){KIA}, Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie){MIA}, Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){MIA}, Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles){KIA}

You find Sarges body first. You then see Chuckles didn't make it. You can't find Tom or Perkins and see that one of the pilots is dead and see that the other pilot is just coming to. You check your watch and see that you were knocked out for about 2 hours.

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: none
Squad: Sgt. Peter Durant(Rocco){KIA}, Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie){MIA}, Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){MIA}, Pvt. Bartholomew Fredrickson(Chuckles){KIA}

"OH god, this is bad" I say to myself, while walking towards the pilot. "are you hurt at all?" I say to the pilot, while searching the surrounding area for the source of the AA fire.

(As a sidenote, shouldn't the M202 be in the misc. part of char.? just wondering.)

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

I get just close enough to have a good spot to fire at them and take out the Laotian soldiers one by one... If I see a spot with no friendly soldiers and only hostiles I throw a grenade there...

pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: M202 FLAME
Squad: Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie){MIA}, Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){MIA},

You are right my bad

"No I seem to be ok. I am just a little shook up from the crash. What is your name private?"

ITheNormalPerson
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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: M202 FLAME
Squad: Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie){MIA}, Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){MIA}

"I'm private Foss, sir" I say, scavenging for weapons, ammo, etc. "So, you know the way back to base? There's no use calling a evac, with that AA turret shooting our birds down."

pablo4270
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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: M202 FLAME
Squad: Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie){MIA}, Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){MIA}, SSgt. Ben Griffith(Wheezy)

"Well I don't have a map but I have a general direction of were to go. But I need weapon," He says. You look around and see a M4A1 Carbine w/ ACOG Scope, a M1014 Shotgun, and a FN Scar-H w/ M203 Grenade Launcher.

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

You are still with McKenzie you will be called in shortly remember.

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: M202 FLAME
Squad: Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie){MIA}, Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){MIA}, SSgt. Ben Griffith(Wheezy)

"here" I say, handing him the M4A1. "But, we should attempt to find the rest of my squad, I don't see two of them, do you want to wait here? Or come along?"

pablo4270
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pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: M202 FLAME
Squad: Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie){MIA}, Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){MIA}, SSgt. Ben Griffith(Wheezy)

"When I was knocked out I sort of came to for a few and saw a person milling about and it wasn't a Laotian. I think I saw the Pfc. insignia. He soon left and when into the jungle towards base."

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"ok, take me to the deriction he went, we might be able to find him before he gets himself into trouble, which hopefully, he won't. He should have an idea of what to do after that" I say, gathering dogtags from the people killed.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

Oh... Well then I watch whats happening through the binoculars and wait for orders

pablo4270
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pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Binoculars
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Cpl. Micheal Buckley(Big Papa), Pvt. Patrick McKenzie(Kilt)

You soon get a radio message saying to take the radio tower in the middle of the camp. You are to link up with the other sniper squad and fight your way to the tower. When you get there you are to snipe any reinforcements and troops that are coming in.

pablo4270
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pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: M202 FLAME
Squad: Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie){MIA}, Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){MIA}, SSgt. Ben Griffith(Wheezy)

He takes you south of your position. He says that this is also the way back to the base. You are walking in the jungle when you hear someone say, "Freeze," and he puts an M9 to your head, "State who you are. And you better not move either," he says to SSgt. Griffith.

ITheNormalPerson
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" "i'm recruit. jeremy, from 5th squad" I say, stealthily removing my M11 from its belt-holder.

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