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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR No attachments)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol[nothing full-auto or burst])
Grenades: Will be given
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo)
Other: None

"Beharut le'hachlif, they, my friend, are our new platoon members; they want to talk to you, by the way" I say throwing him out of his bed bunk "Get talking, they seem to be eager to meet you, habibi"

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight & Silencer
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: M202 FLAME
Squad: Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){POW}, SSgt. Ben Griffith(Wheezy)

"think you can take out that MG gunner, kinda blocking my shots" I say

pablo4270
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Hi my name is Pvt. Rebeka Weston and this is Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley. We are your two new squad mates sir." one says. "Ok then this should be interesting. Echo get up and meet your new squad mates." sarge says. "Woah Hello ladies. I'm Pvt. Robert Johnston, you can call me Echo. Why? you might ask. Well I don't know why." "Do you all have nicknames?" Mackenzie asks. "Well you can call me Al and Noam over here can be called Loon cause this guy pulled of some crazy **** the other day. Oh and by the way Noam because of your crazy **** you are now Pfc. Loon."

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Last Name:Foss
First Name:Trent
Codename:India 5
Nickname: none
Rank: Pvt.
Age:19
Gender:male
Birth-date: 4/6/1983
Country of Origin: Iraq
Biography:wanted to join the army at 18, but parents wouldn't let him. As soon as he got out of his house, he went to army to train as a spec ops or sniper
Height:4'10
Weight:150 lbs.
Physical Description:short, long brownish black hair.
Characteristics:
very stealthy
moderate with any weapons
good in bad situations
bad:
not good with people
not very fast
not good at understanding orders
Primary Wep: Steyr AUG w/ Red Dot Sight & Silencer
Secondary Wep: IMI Desert Eagle (Deagle)
Grenades: m97 grenades (2)
Knife: M11
Misc: M202 FLAME
Squad: Pfc. Richard Perkins(Richie), Pvt. Thomas Hart(Tom){POW}, SSgt. Ben Griffith(Wheezy)

"On it." but just as he fires the tank catches fire. "Get out!" Richie shouts. You and Perkins get out ok but you hear that Weezy's leg is caught.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Wait who is our captain now?

"Right, sir... Loon it is" I say smiling "You two feel at home, Echo only farts every minute-and-a-half and Al is all nice... Except the dope, that is." I get back to brushing my rifle "So, Weston, O'Reilly. You elite commando tough units eh? You from any other countries?" I make sure the scope is nice and waxed "Everyone from shaldag is crazy, by the way... We are trained to be like that"

pablo4270
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

You are a pretty funny guy.

You also need some clarifying. Buckley was A corporal witch is less than a sgt. Buckley was never the leader. Albert was.

"Well I am from Ireland." Mackenzie says. "We are some of the toughest people out there." You think about Patrick and how he was a Proud Irish. "I am from Canada." Rebeka says.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Thank you

"From canada eh? Hmmm Kilt was from Ireland... You might've known him" I say (I was planning to make a whole paragraph of speech teasing the canadian racistly but I decided not to...) "Ya know Kilt, Bahurot?" I ask

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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Bahurot?

"No never heard of any one named kilt. Just a bunch of men in kilts."

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Nvm... Hebrew slang... You know how like mexican people talk with mexican slang while talking english? Same same.

"Ha... Must be nice... Wearing kilts, I should try wearing them. Anyway Kilt is an Irish that died because of a hostile sniper" I say "so, you know of any missions we are going on?"

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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"I hear some birds got shot down by some AA and we gotta go huntin for survivors." Sarge says.

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Aha... AAs... Wonder who got rid of those AAs" I say fiddling with my rifle "So are we going or just hangin' out here?"

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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Actually we are going right bout now." Sarge says. You all walk to the slick. "Good thing someone got to those AA guns or else we would be toast." Weston said when you all touched down

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Aha, of course, actually the dude that took out the first AA. I love him. I want to hug him and kiss him and tell him how much he is awesome. He is awesome. Don't you think he is awesome? I bet he is the most handsome, smart and funny man in the whole wide world" I say starting to look around through the ACOG.

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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Sometimes I don't get you at all thats why you get called Loon. Alright squad we are to move towards the west for about 2 miles and find a crash-site." sarge says. You walk 2 miles and find a wreck of a copter. Sarge tells you to look around.

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Before hike: "I'd bow down to the first man that does get me" I say starting to hike

after hike: I get rifle and ACOG and look around the field of view to see no one has spotted us and then if there is nobody I take out my Bowie and start sort of digging into the wreck to find anything...

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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: None
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston, Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

You find several dead bodies without dog-tags. You see several guns on the ground that look free to swap out.

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