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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR No attachments)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol[nothing full-auto or burst])
Grenades: Will be given
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Canuck... If thats your name... Voices on, I'll tap them out" I get out my uzi and start sneaking slowly toward the sounds.

pablo4270
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Please explain what you mean by tap. It just seems kinda odd.

You walk towards the sound and find a cave. The cave has two solders playing checkers and 3 men walking around.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Tap is a single shot to the head, tap, double tap and tripple tap are different orders of shooting used by US rangers.

I slowly walk unseen close enough that I can roll a grenade below the table where the soldiers are playing checkers. Then I order canuck to help me shoot the soldiers walking around just as the grenade goes off.

pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Well your a Commando not a ranger and it confuses me.

You roll the grenade but just as it goes up a Laotian jumps on you wielding a knife.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Come at me bro"
I use my strength against him, ramming him hard in the chest and pulling out my bowie knife, I then slash at his neck and scream for Canuck to come.


Also, by the way, I think I'm going to post my new RPG in about half-an-hour, just needs a little bit more work.

Oh and look at the "Aliens RPG", tell me what you think of the in-creativity

pablo4270
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pablo4270
1,930 posts
Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

I'm not one to troll on what other people create. But i troll on what people put on stuff I create. Also why are you in the rat tunnel?

You take out everyone and keep moving. You go through the tunnel with out trouble until you hear the bang of AA over your head and see a manhole right above you.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Rat tunnel?

I am simply saying my opinion... I didn't say "It sucks" I asked whats wrong with it...

If some one will ban me for it I will be amazingly sad... And furious... I was trying to help, you know...

"Canuck, AA above, you okay?" I check up on Canuck since she hasn't talked or done much in a while...

pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

NVM They are underground tunnels.

"I'm fine. Looks like we found what we were looking for. Any ideas on what to do?"

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Because I need a passage to the AA gun while my squad is waiting, I am with a Canadian girl Elite Commando that was rescued during a mission in Laotian territory.

I am not stupid. I am no newb either

"I say shoot some people and make some stuff go boom" I say ironically "Joking, but what we are going to do is I go up first, you straight after me, make. No. Noise: clear?"

pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

She wasn't rescued she is just a replacement.

"Ok go whenever you are ready."

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Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Lachaim ve la mavet" I say bursting out the manhole and running out of it while shooting a whole clip at the enemy soldiers above.

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pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

You see that all the Laotians are caught by surprise. You see two AA guns and several MGs pointed towards the surrounding area. You see the rest of your squad burst through the shrub around taking advantage of the distracted enemies.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

I shoot off whatever soldiers remain and group up with Echo and Al "Good of you to join us, it got lonely and miserable down there with only Canuck to accompany me, she didn't talk much"

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Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Haha we can leave now. Pop some smoke," Sarge says. You do so and go back to camp. The next day your squad gets news, "Everyone gather around. We are getting moved to the center off the war. Yes men h*** it self. We are going straight into Korea."

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: IMI Galil w/ ACOG scope
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: Flashlight
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Oh goody, I was trade and now I'm meat" I murmur "By the way, I still don't get this war much"

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