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pablo4270
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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR No attachments)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol[nothing full-auto or burst])
Grenades: Will be given
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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Hypermnestra
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Hypermnestra
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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef

"Yusef, cover me!"
I'll run to the helicopter. This thing is our ticket out of here. I'll commandeer the gun on the helicopter and use it to clear out the enemies.

pablo4270
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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef

It has crashed how can it get you out of there?

You clear the rest of the enemies. Yusef runs over to you and points to your leg. "Shot" he says.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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DeadlyVelociraptor
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Oh, of course, move to direct direct fire that may happen and be killed exactly like our past squad mates," I say. "But of course, I should let them shoot my face off because I'm Loon and I'm craaaaaaazy"

I run downhill to the other side as fast as I can and get in cover far-away this time...

pablo4270
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pablo4270
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Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Your just paranoid get moving," he says as he falls into a hidden rat tunnel.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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DeadlyVelociraptor
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"I... I just... I... really?... I mean...," I mumble and sigh. "Holy **** Noam you are so stupid watch me die". I move close to the position he fell into, "Al, are you okay?"

pablo4270
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pablo4270
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Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Let's go this way," he says, "Echo use your Striker and take the lead. Loon get behind him. Canuck and O'Reiley follow them. Only fire if you have to. We don't want to much unsilenced fire around here."

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Oh I see, you acted stupidly and you are hiding it by giving orders, real pro of you," I say getting into the rat tunnel.

pablo4270
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pablo4270
1,930 posts
Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Mhm get movin solder."

DeadlyVelociraptor
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DeadlyVelociraptor
3,415 posts
Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Right get moving, get moving, I think you said that- like what seven times?," I say moving. "Of course, when I'm shot I'll still need to get moving, when I'm dead my corpse will get moving, I think you should get moving. Get moving, Sarge, Get moving, Canuck. Get moving, Echo. Get moving, war"

pablo4270
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pablo4270
1,930 posts
Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

You start walking when Echo stops everyone, "Hey Loon use your Uzi and go check that little indent in the cave to the left. I don't wanna blow the cover with my unsilenced shotty."

DeadlyVelociraptor
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DeadlyVelociraptor
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Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Then get moving backwards and clear the area," I whisper getting out my uzi. I check out the indent.

pablo4270
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pablo4270
1,930 posts
Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

You turn the corner and a Vietnamese jumps at you with a knife.

DeadlyVelociraptor
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3,415 posts
Nomad

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

I side-blade kick to his crotch, sending flying back and clear 8 bullets on his chest.

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Nomad

Last Name: Ostrovsky
First Name: Dimitri
Rank:Pvt.
Age:24
Gender:Male
Birth-date:1988
Country of Origin: Russian
Biography: Ran away from home, then forced to fight against the chechens when he was 14, Join the the spetsnaz afther that served in Voron Agency.
height:5'15
weight:140 lbs
Physical: ATheltic, Brow hair, green eyes,Spetsnaz tattoo on arm.
characteristics: Good: Stealthy, Endurant, Patient
Bad: Bad with explosives, not a team player, bad with heavy weapons
Primary: Barret 50. Cal
Secondary: M9 beretta
Knife: K-BAR
Misc: None

pablo4270
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pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Ostrovsky
First Name: Dimitri
Rank:Pvt.
Age:24
Gender:Male
Birth-date:1988
Country of Origin: Russian
Biography: Ran away from home, then forced to fight against the Chechens when he was 14, Join the the spetsnaz after that served in Voron Agency.
height:5'15
weight:140 lbs
Physical: Athletic, Brow hair, green eyes,Spetsnaz tattoo on arm.
characteristics: Good: Stealthy, Endurant, Patient
Bad: Bad with explosives, not a team player, bad with heavy weapons
Primary: Barret 50. Cal
Secondary: M9 Beretta
Knife: K-BAR
Misc: None

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