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The year is 2012, a war was struck out in the jungles of Vietnam and most of Asia. You were drafted and went through basic training. Your platoon is approached by a Major one day who needs people for a elite commando unit. You and 3 other guys raise your hands. You then are put through vigorous commando training. You are the only person who made it through the training. You are finally sent to registration and then you are set to go into the jungles.

You walk up to a desk in the registration part of the commando HQ wielding a note of verification saying you passed the training. The woman at the desk hands you a clipboard and says, "Congratulations! Please fill this out."

You look at the form and start filling it out.

Last Name:
First Name:
Rank: Pvt.
Age:18-29
Gender:
Birth-date: (Make it true to the age above ^ the year is 2012)
Country of Origin: (Any were but Vietnam, Korea [united in 2011], Laos, Japan, Cambodia[they are enemies])
Biography:
Height:
Weight:
Physical Description:
Characteristics: 3 good, 3 bad
Primary Wep: (Modern Basic AR No attachments)
Secondary Wep: (Modern Basic Pistol[nothing full-auto or burst])
Grenades: Will be given
Knife: (A modern combat knife No machetes or swords)
Misc: none

"You may not get the guns that you place on the form. We have limited supply of some. Please do not place any attachments on your guns. After you fill out this form it will be sent into sorting and review and you will get sent into the jungle with a squad," she finishes.

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pablo4270
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Well that was close," Echo says and he keep moving. A few minutes later you hear a muffled scream and turns around just in time to see an enemy plunge a knife into Sgt. Peterson's heart.

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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Clear a whole TAR clip at the enemy. Check for pulse. Get the dog-tags. "Well, that leaves that"

pablo4270
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"We better get out of here. They probably heard that. Lemme radio in to HQ Jesus..." Just as he says that. Explosions go of everywhere and rocks start tumbling down, "WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE NOW!" Rebeka shouts.

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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Oh thank you, Ms. Obvious for enlightening me with your oh-so-truthful thoughts. May I suggest getting us nuked and you telling me 'we are going to die', I think that would be a most intellectual experience," I say running to where we got into the rat tunnel.

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Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

You make it out and see Echo and Canuck scrambling behind you. You pull Echo out and see Canuck has here foot stuck in some rubble.

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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Use my perk. Pull her out with shear strength and settle down, "Well, who's takin' lead now?"

pablo4270
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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Sgt. Albert Peterson(Al), Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

Echo just stands there paralyzed and starts breaking down crying.

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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef.

I'll use a piece of my uniform as a tourniquet if it's bleeding really bad(as in, "going to exsanguinate in a few minutes" bad). If not, get a bandage or cloth or something, apply pressure, wrap it around so it stays. Then I'll head towards the helicopter to see if the pilot or copilot made it.

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Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef.

The wound isn't gushing blood is was only a pistol round you think. You see Fink's wounded body around the other side of the plane. You also see both pilots are dead and the windshield is broken and there is damage to the propeller.

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Nomad

Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef.

I'll go help Fink, since he's just wounded.

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Peasant

Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef.

You see he has been shot in several places in the legs and one in the arm.

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Nomad

Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef.

"Yusef, where's the radio? We've gotta call in a medevac." I'll try to stop the bleeding.

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pablo4270
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Peasant

Last Name: Compton.
First Name: Michael.
Nickname:
Codename: Golf 5
Rank: Private.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birth-date: 1992.
Country of Origin: Australia.
Biography: Compton graduated from a good college with a doctorate in biochemistry, then he went on to medical school. He was something of a genius and so attended college at a very young age. Unfortunately, unable to pay the bills, he joined the military and took night classes instead of simply going to school, however he managed to do well in both the military, and get his degree. However, he was awarded several medals for distinguished service and injuries sustained during the war. He remained in the military for a few years, earning his residency as a military doctor back home. He returned home and started his own practice, which ballooned into several different institutions, making him very rich. He was then redrafted into the military, and his institution's values plummeted, making him poor again.
Height: 6'1.
Weight: 165 lbs.
Physical Description: Tan, blue eyes, jet black hair cropped short, tattoos on his upper arms of various symbols, quotes, etc.
Characteristics
Good:
Thanks to prior service, is a better tactician and leader, and is not scared easily
Can patch people up well
Is good with all rifles, including sniper rifles and assault rifles.
Bad:
Because he was drafted instead of enlisting, higher-ups don't trust him as much, and he will not get as much support or promotions as he should
Is bad with melee weapons, but not with his fists.
Is easier to spot because he's tall.
Primary Wep: XM8 LAR[scope w/thermal and night vision capabilities and M203 loaded with fragmentation grenades].
Secondary Wep: SPAS-12 Shotgun.
Grenades: (2) M67 Grenades
Knife: KA-BAR
Misc: None
Other:
Squad: Pvt. Hank Finklemen(Fink), Pvt. Yusef.

He goes and grabs it and turns it to the Arabic radio translator and he calls for medevac. They come and help Fink on the copter. "He looks pretty bad," the medic says, "If you didn't do what you did to stop the bleeding he would of lost too much blood. I am gonna put you in for Corporal maybe even a field medic."

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last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

I say nothing. Wait a little. "Let me get to the point, as private first class I'm the highest ranked one here; Now you're going to listen to my orders... That said if we want to get outa' here alive"

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Peasant

last name: Coleman
First Name: Noam
code name: Papa 5
nick name: Loon
Rank: Pfc.
Age:24
Gender: male
Birth-date: 1988
Country of Origin: Israel
Biography: Grew up wanting to be spec ops in Israel, was early recruited and trained to be spec ops, then sent to work with the US army in the war.
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 140
Physical Description: very tall brown haired man with strong muscles and good slick movement
Characteristics:
good:
1. very fit... strong and fast
2. really smart
3. aims really good with ARs
bad:
1. Tall and can easily be spotted by snipers.
2. not the best sniper in the world...
3. Not good at stealth
Primary Wep: Tar-21 w/ M203 Grenade Launcher
Secondary Wep: Micro Uzi auto pistol w/ silencer
Grenades: (2) M97 grenades
Knife: Bowie knife
Misc: M32 Grenade Launcher
Squad: Pvt. Robert Johnston(Echo), Pvt. Rebeka Weston (Canuck), Pvt. Mackenzie O'Reiley
Other: None

"Alright. I guess we should call for a medevac if her foot is broken or anything," he says mournfully.

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