ForumsForum GamesAmong The Star

116 10166
loco5
offline
loco5
16,287 posts
Peasant

Re-written to be more clear


Based on my old game FSBG so...yeh

Story from FSBG: It is the year 2280 earth made contact with many different alien species making the desolate space of past into a habitat crawling with different species but all is not well, many different wars were caused by the Xenophobia of earth in their past.
----
During the bloody war between the newly inter-planetary Human federation, and the Midor-Fandor Unified nation; as the land battles rage on. (Also if you want to revive FSBG I can do that) In space, even worse ones occur. The Humans in their ignorant ways have declared war on the Fandor and Midor whose first intentions were to establish colonies and trade posts and now raise mighty armies. You will play in a small single seat fighter and make ends meat in the army, and then eventually have ships of whatever class you please.





Races:
Fandor-Midor Unified Nation
---------------------------
Midor: Tall, red aliens with long faces and slender bodies, they are super smart but weak. Their space tech is by far the best in terms of weapons, all their ships are bristling with guns, and their ship armor isn't bad either. But boarding is almost nonexistent (Boarding is of importance). Live to 250

Fandor: Almost a brother race to the Midors, they are human sized with very broad shoulders and a pig like face, their skin color varies from green, to dark grey.
stupid and barely have any armor on the ships, like they were held together by super glue and duct tape and the weapons are fair, but almost undefeated in boarding with their awe inspiring melee weapons. Live to 150.


Human Faction
-------------
Human: Great ships, with strong armor and fair weapons and below average at boarding.

Helghast: They have a completely pale white complexion and are much slimmer than humans this is a slave race, under the grateful control of the Humans who they shall die for almost a foot shorter than your average human. Super advanced armor on the ships building off of human tech with fair weapons and weak boarders.
Live to 40.

Mercenaries
-----------
Malkien: Mercenaries, fight for any side that pays they are foot taller than the average human, pale purple-blue complexion, with long prehensile tails with cat-like eyes. All around average. Live to 120.

Sheet

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Race:
Side: Human faction or Fandor-Midor unified nation
Physical Desc: at least 3
Personality: At least 3
Trait: from above
Bio: At least 5 sentences, optional
Perk: from above
-------------
Ship Name:
Ship: i put
Weapons: i put
Armor: i put
Boarders: You
Misc.: I put (mostly will be boarder equipment)
-------------
Ship Health: 100/100
Ship Armor: I put
Condition: I put


if there is any you're still not clear on, just ask me.

  • 116 Replies
Dragonblaze052
offline
Dragonblaze052
26,677 posts
Peasant

Loco..... you don't understand Elven naming schemes, do you?
Also, give me a syllabic pattern for their names.

loco5
offline
loco5
16,287 posts
Peasant

not DnD elves, Battle for Wesnoth ones. don't know? well get it it's free. but yeh there it's complex



nothing short (6 letter minimum), usually i's are pronounced ee, like the race name. otherwise you have free range

Dragonblaze052
offline
Dragonblaze052
26,677 posts
Peasant

This good?

Blikrâehr Gorktu Nimon


Mind giving me a bit of biological information as to how Midor work?
loco5
offline
loco5
16,287 posts
Peasant

perfect, cept without symbols


also what do you mean? under the hood?

killersup10
offline
killersup10
2,739 posts
Blacksmith

so may words..........i gave up after first paragraph.it looks good but what would i know i'm only bill gates #6 brotther!

loco5
offline
loco5
16,287 posts
Peasant

so may words..........i gave up after first paragraph


this is rather short, seriously grow a pair (of eyes) and suck it up
Dragonblaze052
offline
Dragonblaze052
26,677 posts
Peasant

The symbol was just an apostrophe. The name is Blikr'ehr.

Yes, all the mundane biological functions: what they breath (O2), the basis of their cells (C), the main component of their bodies (H2O), etc. Also, any organ differences compared to humans.

Killer, you have no idea what long is.....

loco5
offline
loco5
16,287 posts
Peasant

Yes, all the mundane biological functions: what they breath (O2), the basis of their cells (C), the main component of their bodies (H2O), etc. Also, any organ differences compared to humans.





they breath oxygen, and oddly enough also methane (it seems the body can "switch" when needed, but they function better in oxygen) but otherwise essentially the same, all the same parts, heart (on the left), stomach, intestines (a few feet shorter than humans), wing wang....
Dragonblaze052
offline
Dragonblaze052
26,677 posts
Peasant

And their eyes, what color would they be (schlera, iris and pupil).
Also, you mind if I send you the bio via email rather than put it on the sheet?

loco5
offline
loco5
16,287 posts
Peasant

Also, you mind if I send you the bio via email rather than put it on the sheet?


seeing as your bios are excruciatingly long, yes and you get 2 perks


white, any darker color, nothing very bright and light gray in the order you put it
Dragonblaze052
offline
Dragonblaze052
26,677 posts
Peasant

Could you tell me a bit about their society and military?

loco5
offline
loco5
16,287 posts
Peasant

their society is surrounded around science and math, with paradoxs making up many monuments. Children go 55 years to school until they are certified passed, those who don't are "Undesirables" and automatically shipped out to the most dangerous sectors of the war.


their navy is much more lax than the army with pistol and melee training, and focusing on the confusing computers of the ships, and a little on the simple primitive mechanics of the Fandor ships. no corporal punishment, instead you have to work complex problems, the more complex the worse the offense.


legend holds of one rowdy cadet who had to do a problem so complex, it took him 50 years to do

Dragonblaze052
offline
Dragonblaze052
26,677 posts
Peasant

Perfect, perfect..... MHUHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
Science and paradoxes are my specialty and what I was going to lean my character to, anyways.

SirNoobalot
offline
SirNoobalot
22,207 posts
Nomad

Am i completely tied to ky race ajd thoe integalactic war or can i frolick off and do my own thang till i'm strong enough?

loco5
offline
loco5
16,287 posts
Peasant

Am i completely tied to ky race ajd thoe integalactic war or can i frolick off and do my own thang till i'm strong enough?


i'm not throwing you against battle ships, you'll do light duty of your choice
Showing 1-15 of 116